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So I had this done before I made the journal entry of doing interesting stuff, its my original character Getsushin when he was younger, much different from what I have of him now, I was going for a more arrogant and cocky kinda look and it seemed to work out. If someone can figure out whats different about him besides the hair, clothing, and usual expression, you get a cookie and a hug. :'D (the last sentence is the hint pretty much. :P Just take a careful look at my past Getsushin stuff and you just might figure it out.)

Name: Getsushin Shirokomori
Age: 23 (in this version 18)
Armament: two hand sword light enough to be held with one hand.

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:icononionman:
Someone means business.

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:iconleafeonfan:
^^; Very girly man you have there, swordmiester. Heels, skirt, long hair...I'm glad I read your comment thoroughly before I posted. That would have been embarrassing on my side, lol.

Let's see...eh, the problem with all sketches is that it's hard to tell what's what. It took a second look for me to realize that was a sword behind him. The handle looks like part of the manskirt. >_<

Well...you wanted more critique. I'm doing my best. :)

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Thats how I normally draw boots. >> Rather than a skirt I was going for something that leaned more toward oriental Chinese type clothing but I guess that didn't work out then. >>

What you suggest so that the sword dosen't look like part of the, er man skit (we shall call it that for now. :P )

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:iconaznswordmaster1:
Oh yes he does. XD Normally you see him all angry serious like, then again this is his younger days. :P

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:iconleafeonfan:
Erm. That last statement was confusing. Are you asking what do I suggest? Maybe moving the hilt away from the shirt...oh yeah, that's a sketch. Not that easy.

Here's something that might help. Try (for a lack of better words) pulling the tip of the handle (the pointy part that's touching the man skirt. Hope I'm being clear) away from the skirt outline? (erm. If that's not clear enough I can probably circle it for you.)

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Hmm I could do that. (Why did I make the hilt design so difficult to redraw. >> )

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:iconleafeonfan:
Because you didn't want it to be bland. :)

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:iconbonestorm99:
Somebody knows how to draw XD
:iconaznswordmaster1:
Uh yeah I've been doing it for a while. >>

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